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Thursday, 27 March 2014
Gallipoli Letter
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
You made a good attempt at this letter from Gallipoli Rajbir. Whatever you are writing will have a beginning, a middle and an end. Your letter starts in the middle and ends. You need to add the details that make it interesting for your audience to read and understand.
1 comment:
You made a good attempt at this letter from Gallipoli Rajbir. Whatever you are writing will have a beginning, a middle and an end. Your letter starts in the middle and ends. You need to add the details that make it interesting for your audience to read and understand.
You can work on this next time.
Miss H
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