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Tuesday, 18 March 2014
Short recount Sensory Garden
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
This is a a short piece of writing and I would expect next time, you would expand this out a lot more and use all your senses to write multiple sentences that give the reader a good idea of what it was like to sit in the sensory garden and see what you saw.
You made a great start but don't forget you need to use all your senses. However, I do like the way you start and finish. Well done!
1 comment:
This is a a short piece of writing and I would expect next time, you would expand this out a lot more and use all your senses to write multiple sentences that give the reader a good idea of what it was like to sit in the sensory garden and see what you saw.
You made a great start but don't forget you need to use all your senses. However, I do like the way you start and finish. Well done!
Miss H
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